NEUROCHIMERISM

Played to goon, and finished crying. Amazing art, I loved the character designs. The characterization was great and the story was even greater .It really made me reflect at myself.

I hope you can make more with success.

kudos for how committed u were to weaving sadistic love with medical content. was a thread i was too meek to pursue this indulgently. pardon that narrowness of my praise, but I'm obsessed with the texture of both the BGs and CGs. I'm not sure what filters Astra used to transform assumedly stock photos into stills straight out of my dreams, but I love it. Also adore your art on how (correct me if I'm wrong) it seems to be a fusion of physical and digital art techniques? Are they edited scans, and if not, how did you get such fantastic digital brushes?

This was sleazy in a really cool and weirdly almost sweet kind of way. The way we as readers live in Minette's head for the most part I think works really well, as do the bits where it zooms out because she's dissociating or in an awkward state in relation to herself; as narrators go, she's a very good one! Vermelia makes for a fascinating character because, on the one hand, it's relatively easy to clock what her 'deal' is and how far she's willing to take it but, on the other hand, as her background is teased near the end, it makes her rather mysterious. Thinking of her as a kind of vampire-like existence was unavoidable to me. The backgrounds were lavish and so good they had me thinking about how to approach creating them in my own work and the soundtrack was simple but effective at underscoring the points when things exploded or seethed. Your art, both for the sprites and for the CGs, was lavish. It was a treat to look at, well-composed, and there was a surprising amount of it. 

The afterstory you're apparently considering I think does go some ways towards addressing the feeling I had that things ended before I really got to process what Vermelia had done to Minette or before anything really came out of that horrific moment. I don't think it's a flaw exactly though. The last section zoomed in so close and so clinically to the process that it crawled under my skin and lived there that, in some ways, the pay off of what was done and how it seems to work played with the tension I felt in such a way that I honestly can't tell what my takeaway is from it all emotionally other than the unspeakable wrongness of it all. Perhaps it's for the better, all things considered. 

All in all, I'd have to say this was a really good jam entry! Great work! It scratched a yuri itch I didn't quite know I had.

Man this RULED. Deliciously indulgent. The dynamic of the sad little meow-meow that is Minette with sadistic, powerful Vermelia is so awful and terrible and hot. The art style throughout is wonderful, distinctive, and suits the story very well. I want to pet both of them.

This was the first VN of significant length I chose to play from the Toxic Yuri VN jam, and I'm so happy that I did. Amazing work!

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Surgery scene was excruciating and beautiful at the same time, I found myself saying "oh, the author KNOWS things about surgery!!" out loud during it lol. Also physically squirming. As someone who does not know much about surgery, it seemed extremely detailed and thought-out and knowledgable. Morbidly fascinating to read. Probably will read it again.

Also the fantasy of wanting to just feel good forever is so fucking real. Despite how fucked up the procedure was, and how unhealthy Vermelias control over Minette is, I found myself a little jealous. Which is perfect for this kind of story, I think. You can see Vermelia's vision. 

Anyway, amazing job creating this VN to be perfectly indulgent and delicious for this niche, fucked-up audience!!I included the page of sketchy notes I made while playing. So much good prose, and very good quotes.

The ending tickled my brain in specific ways that it's never been touched before. The wounds and the constricting of Minette's mind until she can never think a bad thought about herself ever again had me panting and squirming in real life. Thank you for making this and I will be following your career with great interest.

amazing art and writing, in particular the switching perspectives later in the story. and, god, the visceral detail in the last sequence made my neurons fire in the best way, absolutely choice writing. i loved it! extremely looking forward to the afterstory!

i do appreciate niche pervertism, and this, to me, is indeed that. the art is dripping with a gorgeous style, and tbh i've been excited to read this since i first saw the doodles of your little unicorn. she is as wonderful as i imagined. i do wish the ending carried out a little further, but i do like the abruptness, too.

thank you for creating <3

Incredibly well done, you did a beautiful job with establishing the characters and structuring the narrative. Your prose was nearly flawless I would say, and your art style is lovely.

I did find the section that started using a lot of technical, anatomical terms difficult to follow. At first I thought you were just overzealous in your accuracy, but your comments suggest that you were actually writing for a very specific demographic. That is interesting.

So do you think she's better off?

absolutely Gorgeous art in this!! i really love the like full cgs.. the watercolour style plus the fantastic compositions was *chefs kiss* and of course the freak pervert shit Ruled. really awesome vn 🙏🙏🙏

this hit my radar because I heard it was for surgery perverts and ohhhhhh yesss this is the good shit 👌👀👌👀👌👀👌👀👌👀 good shit go౦ԁ sHit👌 thats ✔ some good👌👌shit right👌👌there👌👌👌 right✔there ✔✔if i do ƽaү so my self 💯 i say so 💯 thats what im talking about right there right there (chorus: ʳᶦᵍʰᵗ ᵗʰᵉʳᵉ) mMMMMᎷМ💯 👌👌 👌НO0ОଠOOOOOОଠଠOoooᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒᵒ👌 👌👌 👌 💯 👌 👀 👀 👀 👌👌Good shit

Chimeras are awesome. pretty game and well written!! excellent first VN!

Splendid art this was really good! I quite liked reading this.

YES!!!! This was EXCELLENT! Big fan of how viscerally and detailed many of the scenes here were written, I found them VERY enjoyable!! Also some very lovely afterthoughts. Thank you for sharing! ! ! !